Harshprit GCSE Media Blog

  CHOPRA, Harshprit   Create a new blogpost called ‘Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response’ and then copy in the feedback below. Complete the learner response task below the feedback.   WWW: Planning posted and a 30-second preliminary exercise posted by the deadline – well done! You’ve got some really nice editing moments such as when you cut to the close up of the drink being taken off the shelf. The three shots at the end of the product in different settings work really well too. Now you need to use this experience and your editing skills to deliver two excellent 40+ second adverts that meet the brief.   EBI: Think about when the music comes in – you have it fading in once you’re in the shop but that means the audio for the first 5 seconds or so is a bit strange. For the real coursework you will need a lot more shots which will give you more flexibility over the editing. Finally, the biggest issue is the text on screen at the end – it is way too quick a...

 First ill be walking into the shops whilst holding a phone as I'm hungry. Another shot from inside the shop will be taken where I walk into the shop still using a phone. Then I walk towards the drinks section where I'm walking in an high pace as I'm already in a rush. I quickly look for a fizzy drink but then notice a new drink stocked up [nurishment] I quickly grab the drink from top shelf where I get close up of me grabbing the drink which transitions into me then holding it whilst looking at it. after I decide I want to purchase it I go towards the till where it transitions to the drink being in a classroom then gym to a office desk. Costume: school uniform Lighting / time of day:before school within school at the gym Actors - casting, placement, movement: im the actor outside shops whos advert takes place in the shop Make-up and hair: no make up  Props:school bag  Setting: sunny day morning before going school 4) Shooting schedule  Plan a shooting schedule for y...

  Year 11 Paper 1 assessment: Learner Response Create a blogpost called ' Paper 1 assessment learner response '. 1) Type up your feedback in full (you do not need to write mark/grade if you do not wish to). www. you start of well then lose your way a little in this exam if we can add consistency throughout we will be pushing into the top levels  ebi revise theory and csps narratives and galaxy holding you back here  2) Look at the  mark scheme for this assessment . For Question 2 (12 mark unseen) use the indicative content in the mark scheme to identify  three  points that you could have referred to in your answer. Athletic body connotes that the subject is in condition and well prepared for the ‘battle’. • No direct address but the subject’s eyes are focused on pushing the heavy tyre (physical exertion) which connotes determination and power in the face of adversity. This is reinforced by his facial expression which has his mouth open in a roar which conno...