prelim feedback

 CHOPRA, Harshprit

 

Create a new blogpost called ‘Preliminary exercise feedback and learner response’ and then copy in the feedback below. Complete the learner response task below the feedback.

WWW: Planning posted and a 30-second preliminary exercise posted by the deadline – well done! You’ve got some really nice editing moments such as when you cut to the close up of the drink being taken off the shelf. The three shots at the end of the product in different settings work really well too. Now you need to use this experience and your editing skills to deliver two excellent 40+ second adverts that meet the brief.

EBI: Think about when the music comes in – you have it fading in once you’re in the shop but that means the audio for the first 5 seconds or so is a bit strange. For the real coursework you will need a lot more shots which will give you more flexibility over the editing. Finally, the biggest issue is the text on screen at the end – it is way too quick and the font choice doesn’t work with the brand you have chosen. That will be a key area to improve for the real production.

LR: As your learner response, write what you are planning to make for your real coursework. Will you choose to make the 2 video adverts or 3 print adverts? Explain your decision.

i will be making 2 adverts as i want to be creative with my coursework and take advantage of the editing tools 

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